Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Gods Judgment

1.  what happened to the poor people is that they are starving because their crops drowned because all of summer and autumn it was raining so in when noted the crops wouldn't grow.

2. They turned to him because he had left over crops from the year before

3. he just wanted to kill the poor people cause he thought that they were rats
            "And the country is greatly obliged to me,
             For ridding it in these times forlorn
            Of Rats that only consume the corn."

4. Its the foreshadowing to his death.

5. The rats probably have eaten the painting of Bishop because he  is going to die.

6.  he is scared of the rats attacking

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8.Well cats eat/play until they die with rats and mice and  he included it beacause that shows that there are so many rats that a cat will be afraid

9. Someone (maybe God) sent the rats on a mission to kill Bishop Hatto because he killed the poor people.

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Monday, 23 May 2016

Beowulf

Leo:in the gripe of the grim one. Gruesome march
to Heorot this monster of harm had made

Me: Din filled the room; the Danes were bereft,
castle-dwellers and clansmen all,
earls, of their ale. Angry were both
those savage hall-guards: the house resounded.
Wonder it was the wine-hall firm
in the strain of their struggle stood, to earth
the fair house fell not; too fast it was
within and without by its iron bands
craftily clamped; though there crashed from sill
many a mead-bench—men have told me—
gay with gold, where the grim foes wrestled.
So well had weened the wisest Scyldings
that not ever at all might any man
that bone-decked, brave house break asunder,
crush by craft,—unless clasp of fire
in smoke engulfed it.—Again uprose
din redoubled. Danes of the North
with fear and frenzy were filled, each one,
who from the wall that wailing heard,
God’s foe sounding his grisly song,
cry of the conquered, clamorous pain
from captive of hell. Too closely held him
he who of men in might was strongest
in that same day of this our life.


Alice

Tuesday, 26 April 2016

It's a ......

Wwf emotional, rational do the right thing
Michelin rational
Dove rational because tests
Speed limit rational because it says reasons and maybe emotional cause if your kid does die that's sad
Coca-Cola 

My advert

Mobile phone
Shoes
Laptop
Watch
Smart board
Backpack
Glasses
Chocolate
Double sided torch
Car


Rationality
Compare/contrast
Emotion
Transferance
Combination of above

A rational
A transferance 


Double Sided Torch Rational
Reasons:

Battery life
How bright 
Lights up multiple places
Different colours ( red,orange,yellow,green,blue,purple,pink,rainbow , gold, silver,)
Cheap
Removable second head 
Child friendly 
Easy to use 

Person 1: hey, look at this cool new product.(shows the screen) it's a double sided torch .
Background people: whoooooaaaaaa
Person 1: it's very good in case of emergencies because it's very bright and it's battery lasts for half a year
Background people : half a year!
Person 1: since it's double sided it lights up multiple places. Also if you want you can take the second torch off!
Background people: whooaaaaaa
Person 1: it's very child friendly so it's easy to use!
Person 1: oh yea did I mention it comes in different colours and it only costs 1,99
Background people: 1,99!!!!!!!!
Person 1: come buy this at torch r us.

Double Sided Torch emotional

Person 1: Do you want your family to be safe in case of an emergency?
Person 1: Of course you do
Person 1: With this double sided torch you can ensure that they are safe
Person 1: it's very easy to use and it lasts for over half a year
Person 1: Also it is very bright. It has a removable second head.
Person 1:






Advert


This is transference because be like George and drink coffee

Thursday, 24 March 2016

My story

story line (plot 101)

moment in your narrative
  • what are the conflicts?
  • Man vs man (Rosalina vs Kyoka)
  • which other characters?
  • Rosalina (protagonist) Kyoka, Sting
  • how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
  • She grows by making a decision she would never do and it also confirms a characteristic (brave)

Model text
  • to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
  • example piece(s) posted
  • A touch of the hand and this burning would, on the instant, beautifully reverse itself. Eckels remembered the wording in the advertisements to the letter. Out of chars and ashes, out of dust and coals, like golden salamanders, the old years, the green years, might leap; roses sweeten the air, white hair turn Irish­black, wrinkles vanish; all, everything fly back to seed, flee death, rush down to their beginnings, suns rise in western skies and set in glorious easts, moons eat themselves opposite to the custom, all and everything cupping one in another like Chinese boxes, rabbits into hats, all and everything returning to the fresh death, the seed death, the green death, to the time before the beginning. A touch of a hand might do it, the merest touch of a hand.

    "Unbelievable." Eckels breathed, the light of the Machine on his thin face. "A real Time Machine." He shook his head. "Makes you think, If the election had gone badly yesterday, I might be here now running away from the results. Thank God Keith won. He'll make a fine President of the United States." 
  • description, the way the author writes it
  • dialogue, the way the author writes it

Monday, 1 February 2016

The Cantebury Tales

The Pardoners Tale


Characters: Tom, Dick and Harry. They are all archetypes
Setting: A pub, the oak tree and the town
Disruption: The death of Ambrosius
Conflicts: When they find the bags of gold and decide to kill each other
Climax: When Dick and Harry want to kill Tom

The Knights Tale


Characters: Theseus, Emily, Palamon, Arcite
Setting:a prison, garden,
Disruption: When Palamon and Arcite see Emily for the first time
Conflicts: When Arcite and Palomon want to fight over Emily
Climax: When Arcite and Palomon are going to duel for Emily
Outcomes: Arcite dies and Palamon and Emily get married

Characters: 


The main characters
In the Pardoners Tale the main characters are Tom, Dick and Harry.
In the Knights Tale the main characters are Theseus, Emily, Palamon and Arcite.

Dick: He is dumb because he tried to kill death, he is greedy because he wanted all the gold for himself. He is a flat character because he only has a few personality trait
Palomon: He is brave because he was willing to fight for Emily, he is also kind hearted because he wished to win Emily's love and not to win. He is a flat character because he is only brave and kind hearted which is only a few character traits


Genre:


The Pardoners Tale:

In a morality tale there are ordinary people and has a moral in the end.  This makes the Pardoners Tale a morality tale.  The moral was that if you go looking for death don't be surprised when you find him. The main characters are Tom, Dick and Harry who are ordinary people. These example prove that the pardoners tale is a morality tale. You can tell that the main characters are just ordinary because they don't use magic. 
This story has ordinary people and a moral therefore it makes it a morality tale.


The Nun's priest Tale:


 In a fable there are talking animals and a moral at the end. The nuns priests tale has these features so it makes it a fable. The moral at the end is flattery gets you in trouble and keep your mouth shut (have trust issues) Since it has a moral this further proves that its a fable. The main characters are Chauntacleer (a cock) and Sir Russell Fox (a fox)Chauntacleer speaks and sings and Sir Russell fox speaks. Sir Russell Fox said" Yes! Stretch it for me. Stretch it!" Chaunticleer said "Just listen to this."   Since there are talking animals and a moral at the end this proves that the Nuns Priest Tale is a fable.


The Wife of Baths tale:

A folk tale has a be very believable story, has normal people in it and has a life lesson and has a bit of magic. So this means that the Wife of Baths tale is a folk tale.The lesson in the story was don't flirt with everyone or you'll get in trouble. The setting of the story is a castle and a forest when which is believable. And there are normal people such as Sir Codsbrain, Arthur and Guinivere, but the old woman in the story turns into a beautiful, young lady so she is a bit magical.

The Knights Tale:

 Chivalric romance is a story with chivalric knights and romance. So this makes the Knights Tale a chivalric romance. Arcite and Palamon fall in love with Emily, then later they have a joust for Emilys love. So this proves that the knights tale is a chivalric knight because there are chivalric knights who fight for a girl. Palamon and Arcite are chivalric because they care more about love than fighting.


Tuesday, 12 January 2016

Character

Protagonist - a protagonist is the main character. Like The Crystal Gems (Garnet, Amethyst, Pearl and Steven Universe) from Steven Universe

Antagonist - an antagonist is the bad person in stories. Like gems from homeworld form Steven Universe

Catalyst - the person who changes the story. Like Dr Kalmenius from Clockwork.

Round character- A character who has many character traits. Like The Crystal Gems (Garnet, Amethyst, Pearl and Steven Universe) from Steven Universe

Flat character-archetype- caracatures- A character who doesn't have many character traits. Like Steven Universe's Dad (Greg Universe) from Steven Universe

A growing character- someone who changes throughout the story. Like Steven Universe from Steven Universe

Foil character-